Oh hey! It’s a page!
I’ve been sitting on this new look for Rita4 for what seems like forever, what with all the things getting in the way of actually drawing the comic lately. So it may be jumping the gun a little since she’s naked right now, but I figured I’d share my character/costume designs for her.
These are the first couple pages, where I started exploring. The idea that I wanted her to be dangerously young emerged early. And I figured I’d emphasize her smallness by giving her a tiny, exaggerated hat to contrast with the eminently practical hat her previous incarnation had been sporting. On the right is where it really started to become a Thing, with me settling on a little military-looking hat that made me think of General Jinjur, a character in the second Oz book. It’s not actually the hat that John R. Neil drew on her, but I like it more than his hat, so that’s what I stayed with.
With the hat and hair finalized, I started doodling outfits. In the end I decided to riff on Jinjur some more, and picked up a detail from the stories: her goal was to conquer Oz, and as a symbol of this, she wore a skirt colored like the four quadrants of the country. Whether or not I’ll actually show this in the comic is doubtful, what with the color restrictions involved.
Basically my goal is to play with the idea of “age”; Rita4 and her companions Tom4 and Gary4 are basically Timelords. As such they live a VERY long time with multiple regenerations – tied, in the case of Rita at least, to their hats. So Rita4 here is probably several hundred years old at this point, and yet is manifesting as a little girl. Who behaves in a very adult fashion. (Including bedroom shenanigans but trust me, those aren’t going to show up on-camera. At best there will be VERY elliptical hints that her sex life really hasn’t changed except for a few issues of basic biomechanics. Mostly you’ll just see her smoking cigarettes once she gets dressed and settles into her new persona.)
I need to go back and edit some dialogue at the beginning of Chapter VIII to establish that Rita was on her last hat and thus not expected to come back; I’d originally written it as her having one more hat left, and have since changed my mind. Good thing that chapter’s not in print yet, huh?
(Also here is a drawing of the previous hats of Rita4. I might color this for the bonus material of the second book.)
Mystery-level Science gooes “POIT!”
I just didn’t think “BOINK” was appropriate here, you know?
I love speculative maps. I’m taking a road trip to the western inland seashore.
Based on something like reference! But coming up with the new political divisions of North America was fun. n.n
The Bad News is if the oceans go to +30m half the places I’ve ever lived will be underwater. The Good News is… um…
…that my current apartment is above water even at +30m, albeit on a little peninsula. But then again I grew up in New Atlantis Orleans so it’s even I guess.
Hi there, I’ve been reading through the archive when I stumbled on this:
The „Repubic of Lakotah“ should probably be the Republic of Lakotah.
Thank you for making this comic!
Shiiiit, and that one made it through to the printed volumes, too. Well, it’ll be foxed for the omnibus and/or second printing, at least. Thanks!
And you’re welcome. Thanks for reading it with enough attention to catch typos!