I think I like how this cartoon pitch is shaping up. I shouldn’t have any problems filling out the rest of the blank spaces in time to pitch it to Nickelodeon at SPX. And to Cartoon Network while I’m at it.
Needs a page with a loose map of the galaxy this takes place in, and something about what I’m trying to do with this show. I’ve probably already written a decent explanation of how it should be fun space adventure, with an undercurrent of your enemy is never a villain in their own mind, so stop caricaturing them already. Also a note that ideally this would all be 3D, with super-designey flat color rendering. But probably a wider palette than I’m using here.